Question One complete

I have drafted my first essay and need to make a few amendments to it so that it is at a satisfactory level. I can now attempt my question two essay

Question One cont

I restarted my essay becuase I began to write too much detail about the content and I did not concentrate on whether or not it was useful. I am now in the process of finishing the first essay and by next week will hand it in for checking. Hopefully by next week I will start the second question